Ok now to the unnecessary death of Josh's best friend and Kristen's best friend Sloan's fiancé. The lack of communication between the two main characters really wound me up! He was seriously some kind of saint! Kristen should have just been honest with him, and then let him make his own decision. She would have sex with him but then say no kissing, hand holding or hugging, but then want to be friends with him and hang out. Yes she had medical issues, yes he wanted kids, but she was dishonest with him, didn't communicate with him, ran hot and cold with him and was just basically a bitch. Then there was Joshua (why are so many love interests called Josh btw?!) Kristen lead him on repeatedly. I mean how dare he?!🤣 Kristen did not technically cheat on Tyler, BUT she was constantly thinking about another man instead of him, she didn't answer his calls so that she could hang out with another man, and within minutes of their relationship ending, she jumped into bed with that other man.Even after all of that, he was nice to her, and he ended up getting hurt. The author looked down on him because he was intelligent, highly educated, career driven, liked nice clothes and fancy restaurants. Kristen's long term boyfriend in the military.

She was selfish, self absorbed and manipulative! She was such a bitch to the men in her life. She lied to her boyfriend, and to Josh repeatedly.

Next she wasn't honest, and she did indeed care about what people think about her. Lets just address that first because OMFG I'm sick of reading about these so called perfect women, and then seeing the author compare them to other women who are 'exhausting' or 'crazy.' Why do we need to put down other women in order to boost the heroine?! She was a unicorn, tucked in the body of an attractive woman with a great ass.' 'An honest, no-drama woman who didn't bullshit and drank beer and cussed and didn't care about what people thought about her. Now.Firstly Kristen.OMG when will authors realise that we don't want to read about 'the cool girl?' Kristen was described as an amazing girl who doesn't like drama, doesn't wear make up, ate cheeseburgers, drank beer, and was actually labelled a unicorn four times in the book. I liked Josh, Kristin was funny, and the book spoke about periods and infertility, which isn't really ever addressed in other contemporary romances.

So plus points first, before I get carried away in incandescent rage.ġ) This was mostly well written, and the writing seemed to flow quite well throughout the book.Ģ) The start wasn't bad. JOSHUA AND TYLER DESERVED BETTER! WOMEN WITH INFERTILITY DERSERVED BETTER! BRANDON DERSERVED BETTER!

The friend zone book